Thursday, April 14, 2011

The Gentleman

A man like that- you didn't want to like him 'cos you knew where it led.
He had an easy smile for everyone; they all agreed- he was a rock.
And when you saw him walking in town, and chucking his head in greeting, you liked the kind of rock he was.
Stable and respectful and dependable.

Except everyone knew he wasn't that at all.
The women knew- and the men followed his progress, though it was never him who spoke of what happened every few nights by his place.
And you respected him for his complicit silence and thought- I can save this man who is almost perfect.

But his almostness touched well...almost everybody, one way or another.
So that when you saw him walking in town, a man like that, you looked the other way- and then watched jealously as he nodded his head to the woman behind you.

Almost perfect ruined more lives that downright flawed, I reckon. And women- because they're weak gamblers at best- will never figure out just how long the odds are to perfection.

That man- he had a roving eye. But the little while it was on you, it was still like a frightened bird.
And in that moment of a caught, shared gaze- it was the woman who swooped.
Now they say scornfully, but with more regret than's moral, he'll take all you have.
Yeah. A man like that, he'll take what you fling at him without a flinch.
And sometimes- he'll even say thank you.
And it was the thanks, funnily enough, that broke the woman.

11 comments:

  1. Salaams:

    Sorry for the boo boo above :) I am a work in edits.

    If he read here, "a man like that", would he understand? Or, even care to understand?

    My favorite thumping line:

    "Almost perfect ruined more lives than downright flawed ..."

    Ouch.

    "A man like that" should care even if it is too late.

    Peace to you.

    Onward!

    Ridwan

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  2. There's Wisdom in Women
    'Oh love is fair, and love is rare;' my dear one she said,
    'But love goes lightly over.' I bowed her foolish head,
    And kissed her hair and laughed at her. Such a child was she;
    So new to love, so true to love, and she spoke so bitterly.
    But there's wisdom in women, of more than they have known,
    And thoughts go blowing through them, are wiser than their own,
    Or how should my dear one, being ignorant and young,
    Have cried on love so bitterly, with so true a tongue?

    Rupert Brooke June 1913.

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  3. Wassalam

    Ridwan....
    boo boo! lol..I haven't heard that word in years.
    No worries for all the edits- I finally got to use the 'delete' button without any guilty overtones.

    A man like that- would probably chew off his marinated left leg rather than read some dodgy divorcee's rantings;)
    Though I don't actually know any of his kind in Real Life... Variations, yes- but they were easy to recognise and avoid.
    But poor, faltering saviours are aplenty.
    Suckers.

    Trt
    That was a lovely piece- thank you ever so much for posting.
    I've always had a secret tendre for the earnest Mr. Brooke :)

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  4. I'm not sure I understand all of that but I think it's pretty good anyway!

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  5. Hey Shak...thanks for stopping by.
    You probably have the right idea if you're feeling slightly misogynistic :)

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  6. "Almost perfect ruined more lives that downright flawed, I reckon." This is so true! I'm always weary of 'perfect' and 'nice' guys

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  7. Hey Trinity:)

    Ah. A few weeks on, and you find nice was just a side effect of his prescription, eh?

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  8. There is always some kind of deception in whatever seems to be perfect. And that's why our perceptions of "perfection" is misleading.

    I like men who are openly flawed. You always know where you stand with them. No smoke and mirrors or sneaky trap doors waiting for you.

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  9. Salams Az:)

    Yeah. but I have a sneaky suspicion that a woman's mind is all the smoke you'll need, sometimes.

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  10. Somehow I missed this post when it went up, but it's good. It made me imagine Mel Gibson in "What Women Want." Fortunately for all involved, I was not that good looking or charming, so I never became "that kind of man." LOL ... but I probably would have.

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  11. Hi GT :)
    I think I was imagining a Clint Eastwood type... Tall, somewhat spare limbed, with shy eyes almost.
    And now it's merging with Jack Schaefer's 'Shane'. Ummm....

    As for possible futures- Ha.Don't know bout the looks, but I guess if you spread that mad moxie charm, you'll be grinning in no time;P

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